Change (Haiku) Poem by Govind Ramakrishnan

Change (Haiku)



ground now green~
in six months time
will turn white

© 2016

Sunday, July 10, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
3-4-3 Haiku
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 10 July 2016

I text my 6 grown children every night to wish them sweet dreams and give my love. Tonight I also added a note telling them that although tomorrow will be 90 degrees and humid, to enjoy it for what it is because in 12-13 weeks, it will be cold again. Your Haiku was a timely coincidence

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That's so sweet of you to do. I'm sure the kids appreciate it very much. What you thought was exactly what went through my mind. In the blink of an eye, we will be back in cold land, so enjoy the 90 degrees,

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Ratnakar Mandlik 10 July 2016

A beautifully crafted haiku reiterating the fact that the change is a natural process. Thanks for sharing.

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Thank you for your note. You are so right about change.

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Gil Highlander 10 July 2016

enjoy the summer while it lats.

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thanks Gil, we have only 6 weeks of proper summer left, that is sad.

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Cody Marks 10 July 2016

This is a good one in the style of a haiku!

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thanks Cody for your kind words.

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Stephen Park 10 July 2016

Mr Conciseness, a very good 3-4-3

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something different, so went for the 3-4-3. thanks for your note.

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