Am so confuse, even don't know where to start from, but is this how life will goes on?
I need a change,
i need a true me,
even though defeat stand in front akimbo,
i am ready to scold it,
for there is a scope,
standing in front of me,
leading to my success,
only if i never say die!
Moreso, i am good to go,
ready to do it for my generation,
neither through stemp nor ladder,
but am going for the lift,
so i could earn the quote of the successors,
' to have striven,
to have made the effort,
to have been through to some certain ideas,
this alone is worth of the struggle'.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This poem displays a significant and powerful message but need some work. It is till very raw like clay in a potter's hand and is in need of shaping. Need to check for word choice and grammar. Basically, it's a lovely poem but need some work.