Changes Poem by nicolette anna

Changes

Rating: 5.0


Life is changing all around us
from horse carriages to the moving car,
motorcycles, quads, and even the bus!
children changing to adults
responsibility come upon them
and they try to make every day without any faults.
changing is natural,
with this you'll see,
so cheerish every moment,
and make it last!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Stefani Lombardi 17 March 2008

very good... alot of meaning behind the meaning...or... well... you not what i mean? a lot of value behind the words... ha ha ha i like it! *10*

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helena dombrowski 13 March 2008

wow! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! soooooo true! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! it is like a whole different world out there then a couple years ago. are we killing the earth by 'making the world a better place' as some people put it? ? ? ? ? hmmmmmmmmmm i voted a '10' on this poem! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! -over and out, the devil's work is done! ----------------

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