dr. ram sharma

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Cheerful Thoughts - Poem by dr. ram sharma

CHEERFUL THOUGHTS
Cheerful thoughts like sunbeams,
Lighten up the darkest fears,
For when heart is happy,
There is just no time for tears,
And when face is smiling,
It`s impossible to frown,
And when you are high-spirighted,
You can`t feel low-down


Comments about Cheerful Thoughts by dr. ram sharma

  • Rookie - 10 Points Jeffrey Lee (12/28/2008 12:33:00 PM)

    cute, but the last word seems a little weak. suggestion for last line something like 'you just can't feel down' (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Bob Blackwell (12/28/2008 12:32:00 PM)

    A very happy poem, I like it. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, December 28, 2008



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