Amy Hang

Rookie (12/3/90 / Denver)

Chess - Poem by Amy Hang

I move right
He moves left.
I feel the light
He takes another step.

I had to smile
His face stays straight
I take a look for awhile.
His love for me is fake.

I try to keep up
He takes few more steps
I'm going nuts!
What plans in his mind did he kept?

I look for another way
What did he see?
I don't know what to say
He locked my mind so it can't be free.

My heart was tightly wrapped
He tells me that I thought too late
I was trapped
He says check-mate

-Amy Hang
copyright ©
June 1,2009


Comments about Chess by Amy Hang

  • Rookie - 2 Points Daniel Hooks (6/8/2009 8:30:00 AM)

    This is a good poem Amy (Report) Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Rookie Catrina Heart (6/1/2009 10:53:00 PM)

    My heart was tightly wrapped
    He tells me that I thought too late
    I was trapped
    He says check-mate
    -------
    what a description of being trapped in a fake love......thought too late, sad to know....heart wrenching poem........10 (Report) Reply

Read all 2 comments »



Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?



Poem Submitted: Monday, June 1, 2009

Poem Edited: Sunday, August 8, 2010


[Hata Bildir]