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Andrew Blakemore
(7/30/2009 4:31:00 PM) |
A great write Duncan, a wonderful story containing a moral message. We all know that it's wrong to steal and yet this case is tempered by the fact that he did it out of love for his mother. Best wishes, Andrew
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Cindy Kreiner Sera
(6/1/2009 4:58:00 AM) |
A wonderful write Duncan - it was done for the right reason not self gain - you did pay a price - fear! Mum enjoyed her gift - I would forgive you
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N Olmedo
(3/30/2009 2:26:00 AM) |
I like your poem, when we are young, we make our mistakes even when we are old we make our mistakes, but at least when we are young we have an excuse lol. Your poem took me to when i was a child, my bro and i would get in trouble and he would stay away from my mom all day till she forgot, i would just go in and take my punishment so i could enjoy the rest of my day lol. :) very well done, thank you for sharing.
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Brian Dorn
(11/13/2006 12:25:00 PM) |
An intriguing tale of moral dilema and internal conflict... it certainly makes you think? It may be looked back on with regret, but at the time, a loving (though illegal) gesture. Certainly forgivable, I'd say. Great write, Duncan!
Brian
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Charles Garcia
(2/14/2006 10:13:00 PM) |
Great reminder of my youth.
Especially Valentines day, as I used to raid Mom tripple decker box of Choclates that Dad used to buy her, than I would rearrange the remainder to show that nothing missing. until the box was low on treats than harder to disguise. Dad and Mom, long gone but never forgoten on Valentines Day.
Charles Garcia
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Ivy Christou
(2/12/2006 6:16:00 AM) |
such a endearing poem.. not because you stole something but because you knew on your own that it was the wrong thing to do even if it was shown to be for a noble cause.. Well done!
HBH
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Emma Johnson
(2/12/2006 3:34:00 AM) |
What breath-taking candour!
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Gina Onyemaechi
(2/2/2006 10:05:00 AM) |
Another 'not-a-single-glance-away' write. And I just love the title. Kind regards, Gina.
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Ernestine Northover
(1/31/2006 3:32:00 PM) |
A criminal mind Eh! ! ! A great story from way back, and one that sticks in the mind for a very long time. Nifty poem. Love Ernestine XXX
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