hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 35,580 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Choice - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

I shall make no choice
But make full promise
To make it worthwhile
To sail the boat with own style

Man without woman
Or woman without man
It is simply unthinkable
And practically unworkable

If one holds strength as pillar
Another is force behind as similar
Both pull in same direction
With their dedication

No one can deny the fact
That female can not act
As has been blessed mild by nature
Her acts always make it sure

The male stands erect
With his powerful act
To proved strength and source
He is supreme and force

If sky is dominating
The earth is generating
New souls under her belly
To give birth daily


Comments about Choice by hasmukh amathalal

  • Gold Star - 35,580 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/1/2014 3:24:00 AM)

    Re: Choice (Score: 1)
    by zbird on Tuesday, June 24,2014 (08: 53: 34)
    if i read this correctly i have to disagree with the principle and the politics of this write, but I will say even though I disagree it was well written and has a nice cadence to the lines. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 35,580 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/24/2014 7:56:00 AM)

    I shall make no choice
    But make full promise
    To make it worthwhile (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 32,626 Points Gajanan Mishra (6/23/2014 8:02:00 PM)

    one pillar another force, two sides of the same coin sir, fine. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, June 23, 2014



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