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Kevin Wells
(2/28/2009 11:46:00 AM) |
Love this, Mary. The best writing is that which is drawn from life and I can tell that you actually did this, which makes it interesting and worthy.
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Ridge Cahill
(11/4/2008 5:29:00 AM) |
How wonderful this write is!
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Pushkar Bisht
(9/14/2008 12:25:00 AM) |
Cool silence came to greet
Me like a balm, as though it would defy
The strident background of the passers-by
These lines are really wonderfully crafted. You go into deep feelings of truth. These lines really made me feel great.
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Fay Slimm
(9/3/2008 9:33:00 AM) |
You take us with you so easily Mary by your mastery at both sonnet and observant description. Thank you.
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Bill Thomas
(7/17/2008 4:30:00 AM) |
A perfectly seen short story, beautifully crafted, bringing that peace to the reader... thank you.
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Andrew Blakemore
(2/5/2008 4:02:00 PM) |
Excellent work Mary, I love the contrast between the noisy city and the peace of the church. Andrew '10'
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Foster Blaine
(9/14/2006 3:15:00 PM) |
nice rhythm to this one, kind of a classic feeling, with the pentameter and end rhymes. felt like it could've been me inside that church- you captured the moment perfectly
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