Brian Taylor

Rookie - 133 Points (England)

City Of Angels - Poem by Brian Taylor

Shafting sunbeams. misty eddies,
towering, sculpted, shining chedis,
thundering traffic, six lane highways,
swampy, shabby, back-street by-ways,
mangoes, sticky rice, dom yams,
squeezed into the Mother of all Traffic Jams…..


(From 'Bamboo Leaves')


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Comments about City Of Angels by Brian Taylor

  • Silver Star - 4,040 Points Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar (12/21/2009 11:32:00 PM)

    a skillfull grafted poem.10 (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 75 Points Prince Obed de la Cruz (12/19/2009 8:47:00 AM)

    well described! nice imagery here! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, December 19, 2009

Poem Edited: Thursday, April 18, 2013


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