Beyond dreams an underlying truth
bewilders relevance of existence and there
a sun shines to dawn with unique rays of hope
to subside shadows of disappointments
Beneath the shore of uncanny waves,
a pain erupts to create another assault on
feeble shore, but sun sets there
with full control on wings of earth
Night there twinkles on valiant stars in sky
ornamented with flowers so full of fragrance
silvery moon light beckons its arrival
when mother earth eventually turns on its orbit
Besides one weeping crowd a life ends in silence
cries aloud in shatter but amidst of anguish
a birth fills the vacuum recreating rays
in abundance to a new found inner surprise
There forms a circle with ends and beginning not
translucent to dissect or to define in a manner
clear and understandable format and on the whole
mystery in one enigmatic concealed package called life
Only truth prevails on proven classified theories
and universe plainly smiles away at the helplessness
of its own very inmates their strange uneasiness and turns
pages of mystic theories on its classic encyclopedia
August 6,2008
An exceptionally good work with deep philosphical understanding and portrayal of bare truth.Words and metaphors are aptly placed to give it an excellent imagery. good work. my 10
'Mystery in one enigmatic concealed package called life......classic encyclopedia'..wonderful.Touching truth.Extraordinary write reflecting the real life10and many more stars
I like your concept about that classic encyclopedia and especially the last stanza...'and universe plainly smiles away at the helplessness of its own very inmates...' The smiling universe, turning pages of mystic theories on its classic encyclopedia...so vivid, animated image. Classy! (o.a.)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
poem very good...much insight there...the second and fourth stanzas in particular reveal a lot on the myth of life...ten grade