It rained stars last night
Over a black umbrella
They rolled across darkness
Scatter like silver marbles
Bumping quietly against the blue moon
Mysterious coinciding their downward travel
In random circles
Solitary and circumstantial fervor
Touching my horizon
Then breaking apart.
With pittance of a mixture
Pixy dust and diamond sparkle
The lapse of consciousness creates a fugitive
Escaping the compunction of life....
It is a beautiful write. I need to grow up a little bit to understand it fully.
Life is full of complications.. only....we make them. Good verse. Best wishes suzan
Beautiful words here Howard, quite the visual...............All the best, Diane
Wow...A very pretty poem Howard...nicely done...love the images...it rained stars last night... Hugs, Dee
I just love your use of words Howards so skilfull and so emotional too...thank you for letting us in...
Hello Howard Yes, a lovely piece. I liked the words, coinciding, fervor, horizon, Pixy dust, compunction. These words meld the poem into an enjoyable experience. Adeline
Howard, 'The lapse of consciousness creates a fugitive Escaping the compunction of life' From the help 'with it' somebody has not escaped far while, but I will tell the truth, at you it has well turned out 'internal space' Sincerely, Tsira
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
It rained stars last night Over a black umbrella They rolled across darkness Scatter like silver marbles Now that's great poetry, well done again Howard, sheer excellence Love duncan X