Close, Close, Close Poem by Dibakar Sarkar

Close, Close, Close

Rating: 4.0


bloodshed outdoors
worship indoors
i should listen to
either of the two

either
you close the door
or
close
either of the bloodshed and worship

please worship bloodshed
close bloodshed worship
close bloodshed please
please worship close

close the heart
that hurts
close the eyes
that blind
close the ears
that hear
close the nose
that smells
close the tongue
that tinges

close i, myself and me
close me, myself, i
close myself, i and me
close i and me, myself

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Surya . 17 August 2009

well a little confusing for me. the last para is perplexing. 'close i, myself and me close me, myself, i close myself, i and me close i and me, myself ' voted10 surya

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Mohammed Albalushi 17 August 2009

i like the way the words flow, nice job dear, keep writing dont close

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Antonio Liao 17 August 2009

let my heart close and mind open...culture taught us all what faith says.... all have just comes in its own way.....your a poet of a vision....i salute your style....the each line reveals...thank you and GOD BLESS you....my salute my friend....a 10 +++++

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Christina Phan 17 August 2009

Well written and say wonderful job 10+

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Mubeen Sadhika 17 August 2009

Nicely written. Well thought.

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Sikta Anurakta 17 August 2009

The write up is good. It would be better if u modify your last stanza Regards, Sikta

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