hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 32,792 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Close The Eyes - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

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We may face onslaught and not survive
If no timely action is taken or efforts revived
Nature may not spare us for committed sin
We may have complete loss and situation no win

Glaciers are melting with sudden spate in rivers
Havoc, destruction loss of precious lives all over
Progress may be around but not to rejoice
No one can claim prosperity with single voice

Do we want compete disaster and annihilation
No fresh air but only poison for inhalation
Nature striking at will with deadly weapons
We watch helplessly ………………

We are polluting air with deadly gases
Ground water depleting with heavy access
No one seems to be worried and tense
We have gone berserk with loss of sense

We never heard of tsunami or typhoons before
So many natural calamities and disasters come to fore
Earth quakes and floods have become scene of the day
Nature may not spare us, making hell everyday

Do we need prosperity at cost of eco balance?
Can’t we see disasters without using lance?
Have we to wait for till last day to come?
Is it acceptable to mankind and always welcome?

We may have to close the eyes and prepare for worst
Who may bear brunt or disappear first?
Future generation may not forgive and forget
Let us build new concept before it is too late

Sea is loosing charm and creatures disappear
Land also not spared and heavily bears
Sky is already with full of aimless objects
Nothing will be left on earth but only rejects

Sea may rise with tidal waves and strike
Cities may be wiped out …………..
Earth may bear deserted look with no sign or trace
Future historians may write with loss of face


Comments about Close The Eyes by hasmukh amathalal

  • Rookie Ratna Patel (10/23/2009 4:35:00 AM)

    We are polluting air with deadly gases
    Ground water depleting with heavy access (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 145 Points Nimal Dunuhinga (10/18/2009 8:34:00 PM)

    I closed my eyes and I see a true poet in front of me. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Winnie Angel (10/16/2009 8:57:00 PM)

    Theme true in essence..Winnie (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Pitilosi Mdala (10/14/2009 2:03:00 PM)

    close the eyes nice one with teachings and more teachings (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 791 Points Antonio Liao (10/12/2009 4:01:00 AM)

    choked me in the water i drunk.....seems the body is weak yet! the
    heart willing, all seems the conclusion that the world is but..... has been
    destroyed by human wisdom....what more......what a challenging
    poem of our time....you have visualize the meaning of a platonic
    horizon....thank you my dear friend and God bless you...a 10 +++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Twinkle Vohra (10/11/2009 11:52:00 PM)

    Do we want compete disaster and annihilation
    No fresh air but only poison for inhalation
    Nature striking at will with deadly weapons (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Edwina K (10/11/2009 11:23:00 PM)

    Nature may not spare us for committed sin
    We may have complete loss and situation no win (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Raj Nandy (10/11/2009 9:22:00 PM)

    You have written on important current topics and problems of environment.
    Keep up the good work!
    -Raj (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sadia Hussain (10/11/2009 8:43:00 PM)

    We may face onslaught and not survive
    If no timely action is taken or efforts revived
    Nature may not spare us for committed (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ramdulari Sinha (10/11/2009 10:50:00 AM)

    Progress may be around but not to rejoice
    No one can claim prosperity with single voice (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sita Kesri (10/11/2009 10:22:00 AM)

    Glaciers are melting with sudden spate in rivers
    Havoc, destruction loss of precious lives all over
    Progress may be around but not to rejoice (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sangita Rao (10/11/2009 3:46:00 AM)

    Nature may not spare us for committed sin
    We may have complete loss and situation no win (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Nagesh Ratnavelu (10/10/2009 10:45:00 PM)

    Glaciers are melting with sudden spate in rivers
    Havoc, destruction loss of precious lives all over
    Progress may be around but not to rejoice (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sunita Rao (10/10/2009 9:31:00 PM)

    I acknowledge the outcome of efforts
    May be it is possible with little support (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sunita Rao (10/10/2009 9:31:00 PM)

    I acknowledge the outcome of efforts
    May be it is possible with little support (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Venkat Ramanna (10/10/2009 7:57:00 PM)

    We may face onslaught and not survive
    If no timely action is taken or efforts revived
    Nature may not spare us for committed sin (Report) Reply

  • Rookie K.v. Subbarao (10/10/2009 9:03:00 AM)

    We are polluting air with deadly gases
    Ground water depleting with heavy access (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Darshna Chopra (10/10/2009 7:15:00 AM)

    Do we want compete disaster and annihilation
    No fresh air but only poison for inhalation (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Indani Narayan (10/9/2009 10:29:00 PM)

    We may face onslaught and not survive
    If no timely action is taken or efforts revived (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Lalvani Rekha (10/9/2009 9:47:00 PM)

    Havoc, destruction loss of precious lives all over
    Progress may be around but not to rejoice
    No one can claim prosperity with single voice (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, October 4, 2009



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