Closeure Poem by Carrol Hoffman

Closeure



why did you build me up to tear me down
why did you leve me
i thought i would never get through this
but today i got over you
i should have seen this comeing
and i should have ran
but now im fanily getting closeure
i should have seen this comeing
now im left to pick up the pices of my heart

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amanda Lukas 14 May 2008

You have a great idea here. Very good. Just a little suggestion: try using spell-check when you proof your writing.

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Carrol Hoffman

Carrol Hoffman

fort.smith arkansas
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