Closing The Windows Poem by Suki Nakamura

Closing The Windows



it is dark, you keep on saying
what i see is otherwise
it is a broad day and the sun is brightly shining
the flowers are abloom
and the trees are a swaying
and the sea so blue
the clouds as white as snow

it is dark, you keep on saying again and again
this world needs a light much brighter than the sun
i am confused, until you close all the windows of your soul

no one weeps.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Padmapriya Boddapati 15 November 2009

It is closing the windows around your soul that puts it into darkness. You have managed to convey something very sublime very simply.Keep up the good work.

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