Cobblestone Poem by Cigeng Zhang

Cobblestone

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The cobbles are tiny stars in the river
Their delicate light spread on the ripple

A kid holding a small bamboo basket
Come to pick up the cobbles in sunset

Out of the water, bring them to her place
Hey, the cobbles are just some oval stones

Cobblestone
Thursday, April 14, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: thoughts
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kwai Chee Low 19 April 2016

What an exquisite picture your poem paints in the mind! Vivid imagery, childlike joy are encapsulated within just three stanzas. Thank you for sharing, Cigeng. I enjoyed it, immensely!

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Cigeng Zhang 21 April 2016

Thank you for your nice comment as usual!

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Kwai Chee Low 19 April 2016

What a delightful picture this poem paints in the mind! Vivid imagery, gentle and childlike joy are encapsulated in just three stanzas...Thank you for sharing, Cigeng. I enjoyed it, immensely!

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Dr Antony Theodore 14 April 2016

The cobbles are tiny stars in the river Their delicate light spread on the ripple what an imagination! ! ! tiny stars of the river.... the boy at the riven bank.... sooooooo fine and so good and beautiful. thank you dear poet. tony

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Cigeng Zhang 15 April 2016

Thank you Tony for your encouraging comment!

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Gajanan Mishra 14 April 2016

tiny stars in the river, very fine..

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Cigeng Zhang 14 April 2016

Thank you Gajanan for your reading and comment!

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