Cold Poem by Humfa Davis

Cold

Rating: 5.0


So cold. deep down I don't show it
but, its a huge load.
So hard of an burden it sets a tole.
Drowning in the sea of faith.
Gagging and trying to remember but times up its to late.
Down to my last breath I feel as if I have no soul.
Deep down. its cold. very cold

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hilton Ball 18 July 2011

i like it but Gagging lol wow smh

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 17 July 2011

Nice poem composed with vivid imagery. I liked the theme very much. Kudos to your skill. Keep it up. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... I shall be highly obliged if you please read and rate my poem 'A world of treason' on page 4. Warmest regards Akmal

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