Estrellita Dedel

Rookie (Davao City, Philippines)

Colorless Rainbows - Poem by Estrellita Dedel

mrs. moon stole the pot of gold
when the sky showered the earth with love and wrath.
mrs. moon stole the pot of gold
while the sun was taking its steamy bath.
the rainbows bled their colors
fused into clear air with no strain
so the rainbows lost their colors
and borrowed the clearness of the rain


Comments about Colorless Rainbows by Estrellita Dedel

  • Freshman - 997 Points Naida Nepascua Supnet (9/17/2011 4:00:00 AM)

    i like the personification you give to mrs.moon
    i find it cute
    also i like the theme because i seem to imagine bedtime stories
    nice cute poem (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Estrellita Dedel (8/14/2011 5:33:00 AM)

    Thanks, Unwritten Soul. Hahaha! The intent of writing the poem is actually political. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,253 Points Unwritten Soul (8/13/2011 12:28:00 AM)

    Nice title! ! , but if rainbow turn to colorless, it not being rainbow as itself anymore...We know, rainbow always there but hiding in the light, reveal after rain...So dont worry if rainbow loose it colors coz it just hiding behind the spectrum of light :) _Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, August 12, 2011

Poem Edited: Saturday, August 13, 2011


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