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All different colours absorbed in as VIBGYOR,
Choice different but they are choice of yours,
Colours do form part of our life and aim,
Not particular choice of colour we can claim,
When rays pass through particles, form rainbow,
Nature's beauty boom not with angle narrow,
All splashed in the sky and across the horizons,
No restrictions and can be seen by every ones,
Colours not confine with simple object,
Adding colour to it means new ideas inject,
Who can ignore without praise and reject?
Embodiment of love in vastness and subject,
Praise of redness on cheeks may add to beauty,
Pearls, jewels, diamonds may form part of booty,
Colours to all and colours too few,
Sweetness in honey dew or morning dew,
Colourful fancy dresses always attraction of fair,
Pointer always at beautiful well dressed pair,
Rose pink or any flower when put in hair,
Cooked food smell sweet fragrance and flair,
Note: - V..Violet, I..indigo and so on for VIBGYOR
hasmukh amathalal
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Thursday, June 04, 2009 |
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Tuesday, May 24, 2011 |
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Ken E Hall (1/31/2012 2:11:00 AM)
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Colours of nature so well portrayed and I must say the female is the chief colour picker
on earth next to the peacock thanks for a rainbow of words...regards
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Seema Chowdhury (3/26/2010 8:08:00 AM)
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very colorful and symbolic poem.
interesting to read.
thanks for sharing
take care
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Pradyumna Jyotir (3/17/2010 8:12:00 PM)
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it really amazes me how you can pen poems so beautifully on practically any aspectof life...on any subject.
A colorful symhony...10+++
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Rinki Nandy (1/25/2010 8:52:00 PM)
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Colourful fancy dresses always attraction of fair,
Pointer always at beautiful well dressed pair,
Rose pink or any flower when put in hair,
Cooked food smell sweet fragrance and flair,
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (10/30/2009 11:43:00 AM)
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COLORS HAVE ADDED TO MY LIFE.
TEN.
MS. NIVEDITA.
UK
Hon’ble Poet,
Sorry to say that Checkmate has faded out of Elite 500 discovered after I posted you note.
Regards,
Ms. Nivedita
UK
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Twinkle Vohra (9/14/2009 10:31:00 PM)
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Praise of redness on cheeks may add to beauty,
Pearls, jewels, diamonds may form part of booty,
Colours to all and colours too few,
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Sagarika Shah (9/14/2009 10:24:00 PM)
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Praise of redness on cheeks may add to beauty,
Pearls, jewels, diamonds may form part of booty,
Colours to all and colours too few,
Sweetness in honey dew or morning dew,
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Sachin Goswami (9/14/2009 10:19:00 PM)
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All different colours absorbed in as VIBGYOR,
Choice different but they are choice of yours,
Colours do form part of our life and aim,
Not particular choice of colour we can claim
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Sangita Rao (9/8/2009 9:54:00 PM)
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When rays pass through particles, form rainbow,
Nature’s beauty boom not with angle narrow,
All splashed in the sky and across the horizons
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Edwina K (9/7/2009 7:46:00 AM)
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When rays pass through particles, form rainbow,
Nature’s beauty boom not with angle narrow, ...10
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