Colours Of Distance Poem by Sanjukta Nag

Colours Of Distance

Rating: 4.5


You are running faster
With your ears shut by deaf happiness.
Body penetrates
The translucent landscape of air,
Leaving red moisture of love poems behind.
I'm screaming your name
In a voice higher than white skyscrapers,
But your silhouette is getting smaller
Against the orange backdrop of a setting sun.
Now, I can reach your little image
Through the curved distance
Between my index finger and thumb.
Though at some point,
It will also dissolve over the horizon.
Then I'll put my eyes on a kaleidoscope
To envision your vividness through imagination.

Friday, November 13, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love,relationship,space
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 13 November 2015

Running faster shut by deep happiness is very amazingly brought up closer with distances among colours. Through the curved distance between index finger and thumb the imagery of vividness is well painted with colours of words. Very wise and interesting poem shared definitely...10

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Edward Kofi Louis 14 January 2016

Colours of life and colours of love. Nice work.

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Bharati Nayak 16 November 2015

Awesome.The intensity of love and desire to express those feelings portrayed superbly.- - - - - - - - 10

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Loke Kok Yee 13 November 2015

I tried to do the same but my imagination today was lame thanks-10

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Anil Kumar Panda 13 November 2015

Rich with vocabulary there is a feeling of tenderness and love while reading. Awesome drop! !

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M Asim Nehal 13 November 2015

Your poems, Between my index finger and thumb.......I can see now your vividness in them..............LOVELY, Fantastic and amusing..I don't know how to react.....ah..

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