Come Back Poem by ajith patnaik

Come Back

Rating: 5.0


all the oceans became waves of tears in my eyes.
all the deserts became vapours of frustration in my heart.
where ever i stay why am i not with you?
it is you that my soul repeatedly asks for.
it is you that my silence is running after.
i like you, you're my life, why should ilive
without your shodow by my side
whom should i tell all this to? except myself
what is left with me now? except my tears.
my life becomes complete
when i walk with you side by side is that true?
what do u speak of my life being complete
when i didnt even touch your hand upto now.
am getting drenched in the aftermath of this relationship.
no matter who comes before me i think its you.
but even then why doesnt my heart agree with me?
though this truth sounds like a lie,
truth that you'll never come back to me
why wont i agree with my heart?
i feel now as if winter is all around me
burried under snow, burried under the memories of you
when will you bring spring to my life?
when will you come back to me?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Indira Babbellapati 15 January 2009

the intensity pours forth at one go...

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januel l 12 January 2009

love is painful, although this is a beatiful poem..

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Linda Ori 12 January 2009

Ah, lost love is such a painful emotion. Like a huge hole that is oozing our very lifeblood. Of course we want it back, but need to learn that maybe it was not meant to be. Perhaps there is someone better waiting for us to open that other door. When God doesn't give us what we want, it's because He has other plans for us. Heartbreaking read, and one that we can all identify with at some point in our lives. Well written. Linda

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