Till The End Poem by ajith patnaik

Till The End

Rating: 5.0


i now look at the sky and say
that i'll surely live another day

to tell my story and show the world
that there once lived a person with my name

who wished god that he could stay
a second more and breathe some air

he just hoped that he could live
to express his love inside hard to give

unfortunately for him he loved someone
not like others who love for fun

he felt bad that he couldnt share
his life with that girl, which's not fair

above all he wanted to breathe
a second more which felt so free

suprisingly for everyone he found amile
in that grief which always stood by

he faced the truth with a hope
that she'll be his SOME OTHER DAY

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Min Sia 12 December 2008

Lovely..strong emotions flowing through........ After the great grief..there's still someone else around... Great poem..very nice concept...

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Yaseen Anwer 12 December 2008

hello dear you rock! What a fine contruction. good work

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Ency Bearis 25 December 2008

a poignant verses..well narrated..great piece...

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C. P. Sharma 24 December 2008

The poem flows so well and ver well penned. Keep it up. CP

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XXxxKimberleyxxXX .. 23 December 2008

everyone has got to have there last minutes in this world and join the under world i am writing a peom at school about life and death and i will be putting it on here once i have finished it :) nice peom keep up the good work xx kimberley xx

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premji premji 23 December 2008

death.. that's the only reality in life!

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Anjali Sinha 12 December 2008

very sad this is like that movie 'Lovestory' ++++10 regards anjali

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