hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 37,749 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Common Link - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

There is common bond
When you live in same pond
Different kind of fishes may be the companion
Still it is worthwhile union

You may have single entity
With same purpose and utility
You are confined to certain areas
With same appeal and pleas

Faith has some restriction
As you follow majority of fractions
It is called community
That serves more humanity

Language forms no barrier
It serves as carrier
Relation is created life long
Everything is addressed before going wrong

There is linkage
As you advance with age
History never repeats again
Those who adjust with time never face the pain

Common thread keeps us together
They are addressed as sisters and brothers
There is lot more to venture
To think of nice life and future


Comments about Common Link by hasmukh amathalal

  • Gold Star - 37,749 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/13/2013 9:13:00 PM)

    Susan Wall44 minutes ago
    i think the poeple i used to work for was very shallow because i gaave my heart to them and yet i was treated like i was a nothing. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 37,749 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/13/2013 9:10:00 PM)

    Well expressed


    Levi Oguike50 minutes ago
    Nice
    Comment 0
    good poem (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 37,749 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/13/2013 9:10:00 PM)

    Guilty Pleasure50 minutes ago
    spiritual musings..
    Comment 0
    nice (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 37,749 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/13/2013 9:09:00 PM)

    ash wolf 50 minutes ago
    i liked your lines (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 37,749 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/13/2013 9:08:00 PM)

    very nice


    Susan Wall50 minutes ago
    good work like it
    Comment 0 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 37,749 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/13/2013 9:08:00 PM)

    For personal reasons...

    Jordan Dumer47 minutes ago
    I can't relate to the following stanza,

    Faith has some restriction
    As you follow majority of fractions
    It is called community
    That serves more humanity

    It comes off as too conformist. What about diversity as serving the community in this mult-cultural world we live in now days?
    Comment 1 Comment0


    Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago
    people prefer to live with community.. general reference
    0 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 37,749 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/13/2013 8:03:00 PM)

    There is common bond
    When you live in same pond (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, November 13, 2013



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