hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 30,190 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Complete heaven Poem by hasmukh amathalal


Ever since I have seen you
I find all colors are true
Each reminds me of its importance
I have become great admirer since

You seemed pious and intelligent
Some logic behind it when you present
I was impressed upon your brilliance
That was the start of feelings at once

Who else can be my choice?
To whom should I offer with promise?
That I shall stand with each word
Hold hand permanently and move forward

You have been miles apart
Yet I feel very much part
I see you through vision
I find no loneliness with confusion

I want real embrace
where I can find your shining cheeks
read your eyes in depth
and take slowly the breath

I find complete heaven
With no doubt and happily driven
Where lust and desires are separate
I wait eagerly here and happily state

Submitted: Tuesday, June 10, 2014
Edited: Wednesday, June 11, 2014

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  • Gold Star - 30,190 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/10/2014 9:22:00 PM)

    So beautiful! ! ! !

    Elizabeth King16 minutes ago
    I love this! ! ! ! ! ! It's beautiful! Great poem! ! ! ! !
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  • Gold Star - 30,190 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/10/2014 9:21:00 PM)

    eautiful! Great poem! ! ! ! !
    Comment +1
    uhm


    Roberto Rayo16 minutes ago
    Wow really good
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  • Gold Star - 30,190 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/10/2014 9:21:00 PM)

    My review on your poem. Kyle Roberts


    Kyle Roberts15 minutes ago
    It was good i like how you got your point across as if you were talking to a person really inspirational. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 30,190 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/10/2014 8:57:00 PM)

    Ever since I have seen you
    I find all colors are true
    Each reminds me of its importance
    I have become great admirer since

    You seemed pious and intelligent
    Some logic behind it when you present
    I was impressed upon your brilliance
    That was the start of feelings at once

    Who else can be my choice?
    To whom should I offer with promise?
    That I shall stand with each word
    Hold hand permanently and move forward

    You have been miles apart
    Yet I feel very much part
    I see you through vision
    I find no loneliness with confusion

    I want real embrace
    where I can find your shining cheeks
    read your eyes in depth
    and take slowly the breath

    I find complete heaven
    With no doubt and happily driven
    Where lust and desires are separate
    I wait eagerly here and happily state (Report) Reply

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