Confidence Poem by Sophie Kant

Confidence

Rating: 4.0


My hurt became a star
That shined right above me, around me
An expanding bright sheen that
Enclosed all spaces.

Underneath my feet is an indistinct glass,
non-transparent in its thickness.
Osmosis. The star filters out
Everything except the bad.

My own brightness fills the room.

In everything I shine through.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 05 July 2008

The creativity of this writing is somewhat stunning. To take something bright and turn it into something dark is quit a reversal. The boldness required to try to alter a symbol, speaks of a kind of brashness. This writer has got to be in rebellion against something. A good writing. But a challenging one. I believe I understood it, but my mind is still stunned. GW62

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