Confused Poem by sexinaomi forever

Confused

Rating: 4.8


up all night just thinking bout you,
i cant get you outta my head i dont know what to do.
i think about you every morning and ten times every night,
always just thinking of what might....
if i told you how i really feel,
would you tell me you loved me too.
or would you hide your feelings and expect me to do the same,
just to include me in your stupid little game.
make me forget my feelings for you,
seriously im so confused and i dont know what to do.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Menime Soul..'d' Ugliloner 11 February 2010

don't let the confusion stay in your love or love will walk away from you getting confused. a true love never waits to hear the same from the other, 'coz no matter what he /she will reply, true love will always b there where it was.. Nicely written and rhymed.

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Menime Soul..'d' Ugliloner 11 February 2010

don't let the confusion stay in your love or love will walk away from you getting confused. a true love never waits to hear the same the other, 'coz no matter what he /she will reply, true love will always b there where it was.. Nicely written and rhymed.

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Fay Slimm 04 December 2009

Well constructed verse Naomi and poetically describing feelings of confusion in a very sound way....... keep writing and top marks for this..... from Fay.

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would you tell me you loved me too. or would you hide your feelings and expect me to do the same, just to include me in your stupid little game. make me forget my feelings for you, hmmm interesting Naomi

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