Confusion Poem by Rhys Cadogan

Confusion

Rating: 2.7


A messed up mind,
One thought or twenty.
Where do I start? ,
All of me.. feel so empty.

Not ready for this,
Run run run away.
Escaping thoughts leaking,
Right here I lay.

Waiting on someone,
Save me? .
Restart life,
Let me be.

Need answers inside,
Its like a trend.
Not the first time.
Where does this end? .

Rhys Ullah

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
pied piper 31 December 2008

We have all felt this way more than once in our lives....... We just don't like to admitt it.... Great write. Well penned.

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Raj Arumugam 31 December 2008

a good poem, Rhys - it's important to ask questions and to keep an open mind as the persona in this poem does

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Joseph Poewhit 31 December 2008

Just keeps flowing till

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