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Fatima Nusairat

(Jordan)

Confusion vision


Confusion vision..
The way you write - for example-
Sometimes..
bleeding the ink
On the water page,
And sometimes,
By the pen
Knocking
The roof of the sky
Unite the universe
In your vision!
Because of that..
As the shadow in
The sky..
I come back to you!

Submitted: Thursday, May 09, 2013
Edited: Tuesday, September 17, 2013

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  • Fatima Nusairat (5/9/2013 1:12:00 PM)

    Oh.., may be the translation here is affecting the meaning of my poem :) , thanx for the comment Guess Who..! (Report) Reply

  • Guess Who (5/9/2013 11:28:00 AM)

    Very complicated..... got good expressions here but sorry couldn't understand your special art maybe i got an idea but it surpassed me..... i like your way keep the good work up...... Guess Who (Report) Reply

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