Amy

Rookie (28/06/1993)

Consequences - Poem by Amy

Happiness and sadness
Both in contrast
You are happy to have finished
But sad to come last

Sadness and happiness
Together as one
You are happy it’s not raining
But sad there’s no sun

Happiness and sadness
Always together
You are happy that you passed
But sad you aren’t clever

Sadness and happiness
Come in a pair
You're happy it’s only a dream
But sad it’s a nightmare

Sadness and happiness
Build confidence
But at certain times
Lead to consequence


Comments about Consequences by Amy

  • Rookie Ian Bowen (5/26/2009 2:09:00 AM)

    Nice one Amy...well written.

    Regards,
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  • Rookie - 3 Points Dr Hitesh Sheth (4/14/2009 12:25:00 AM)

    Sadness and happiness
    Come in a pair
    You're happy it’s only a dream
    But sad it’s a nightmare...........................hey you are too wise for your age..............Good Write..................... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 80 Points Kesav Easwaran (12/5/2008 5:51:00 AM)

    wonderful philosophy in beautiful poetic lines... good work...great thinking considering your young age, Amy...i liked this write...10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Karla Bardanza (11/24/2008 12:34:00 PM)

    They are two sides of the same coin...What we have to do is balance them in our lives!

    Hugs

    Karla Bardanza (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, November 24, 2008



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