Consequences Poem by Amy

Consequences

Rating: 2.8


Happiness and sadness
Both in contrast
You are happy to have finished
But sad to come last

Sadness and happiness
Together as one
You are happy it’s not raining
But sad there’s no sun

Happiness and sadness
Always together
You are happy that you passed
But sad you aren’t clever

Sadness and happiness
Come in a pair
You're happy it’s only a dream
But sad it’s a nightmare

Sadness and happiness
Build confidence
But at certain times
Lead to consequence

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ian Bowen 26 May 2009

Nice one Amy...well written. Regards, Ian

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 14 April 2009

Sadness and happiness Come in a pair You're happy it’s only a dream But sad it’s a nightmare...........................hey you are too wise for your age..............Good Write.....................

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Kesav Easwaran 05 December 2008

wonderful philosophy in beautiful poetic lines... good work...great thinking considering your young age, Amy...i liked this write...10

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Karla Bardanza 24 November 2008

They are two sides of the same coin...What we have to do is balance them in our lives! Hugs Karla Bardanza

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