(28/06/1993)

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Nobody's Perfect

Nobody’s perfect
But nobody tries
No one gets respect
Everyone lies

Nobody’s perfect
Everyone cries
What did you expect?
Everything dies

Nobody’s perfect
But no one knows why
Is it for effect?
It just ends in a sigh

Nobody’s perfect
They just turn their backs
When life becomes wrecked
They turn to dope or jack

Nobody’s perfect
We get fired, we get sacked
Treating others with disrespect
Then we pack

No, the world isn’t great
It’s full of lies and deceit
Plastic girls, completely fake
But at least it’s complete

Submitted: Thursday, September 11, 2008


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  • Leslie Ching (2/22/2009 1:17:00 PM)

    true...at some point we all buckle under the pressure of stress or depression...indeed, nobody's perfect, but that doesn't necessarily mean nobody tries, it's just that they try and never get there. (i am one of those people-perfectionism is my biggest problem.) an interesting read...a 10++++++++ to you
    lc

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  • Lisa Deer (11/5/2008 5:15:00 PM)

    Amen to that Amy. perfect is very unnatractive, especially when its bought and touched up till their faces aren't able to use any expression any more, keep onw riting!

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  • Roy Storey (9/24/2008 4:39:00 PM)

    Only 9 i think its worth 10 as i am not perfect.

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  • Chris Newlash (9/22/2008 9:28:00 PM)

    Good poem, very true and thanks for reading my poem, All my heart

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  • Amber ... (9/22/2008 4:36:00 PM)

    thank you. oh, great poems, i have read a few

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  • Reshma Ramesh (9/18/2008 7:17:00 AM)

    neat keep it up..............

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  • Ivor Hogg (9/17/2008 5:35:00 PM)

    The first thing I taught my chidren was don't expect life to be fair. You are correct no one is or can be perfect. You have a talent for ryhming but need to pay attention to your meter

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  • David Threadgold (9/15/2008 11:40:00 AM)

    Hi Amy. Your right not everything is perfect, but there is a lot more of life still to be seen and a lot of it is much better. well written Regards Dave T.

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  • Luis Gil (9/14/2008 4:43:00 AM)

    If it were perfect, it would be boring... So many things to learn, so much beauty to deserve... Good poem, Amy.

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  • Thomas Viruvelil (9/13/2008 6:00:00 AM)

    Life has more positives.But we tend to notice only negetives
    Keep looking for positives and do not get mired in negetives

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