Core Motion Poem by Rebekah Gamble

Core Motion

Rating: 5.0


It’s something like a fire,
Consuming and burning.
It’s something like a flower
Blooming and wilting in its time.
It’s written by the heart.

It’s something treacherous
Like a steep slippery rock face.
It’s something like a tomb,
Old and haunting.
It’s the writings of the heart.

It’s something like a rusted cage,
Rotten but binding.
It’s something like glass,
Frail and sharp.
It’s written by the heart.

It’s something like Beethoven’s fifth.
It’s sweeping, deep and forceful.
It’s something like a two-edged sword,
Always biting back,
For it is written by the heart.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashraful Musaddeq 16 September 2008

10 for this nice poem with nice imagery within a nice form.

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Ivor Hogg 01 January 2008

I am an old tradionalist poet with little liking for free form which is often merely mangled prose I can appreciate well written works of any style as this one certainly is ivor aka poeticpiers

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Rebekah Gamble

Rebekah Gamble

Pittsburgh, Penna., U.S.A.
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