Whether you agree or disagree
The poet may feel it not free
That may upset him for next poem
He may concentrate more on them
The theme does not change
The youth can not turn into old age
The poetry is such flow
Even zigzag may have to allow
The moon does not become sun
The stars can not come near soon
You try to sleep in night
In dreams you can not fight
So long it gives universal message
Make poet a happy person by comment on his page
Pick up good points for personal change
If that suits your temperamental phase
The poem must be given due respect
If not read here then pick up the comments
That might have been read somewhere
It may strengthen points here
The readers may know correctly
What other people think rightly
It may find now right evaluation
The poet may find now correct revelation
Hasmukh Mehta welcome Maricela Ramírez and Emilia Ayuk like this. 2 secs · Unlike · 1
I love it Kayla Clark22 minutes ago I think you did a great job of giving advice AND putting it into poem form. Good Job! Comment +1
Whether you agree or disagree The poet may feel it not free
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Scott Ransopher Another good poem Hasmukh! 11 mins · Unlike · 1