Count Alone Poem by SALINI NAIR

Count Alone

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Darkness is persuaded
Alone in the midst of the world
Here the plans are plenty
Subtle for the invasion
Plots are looming inside
Silence clarifies the threat
Calmness that clench in darkness
Profound battle groom inside

Next dawn carry some shine
There this dullness shrinks as a whole
Plots will expose with thunder
Cage that merge on the way of sin
Though the flame is still afar
Battle that bloom the fruit bitter
Though the eyes of witness absent sometimes
An eye of truth is open always! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

©2014 SALINI.S.NAIR. All rights reserved.

Monday, September 29, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: sin
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
karma is the dictator of life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 07 October 2014

Alone in the midst of the world every one is. Count alone is the secret. Beautifully presented the truth, Nice poem.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 30 September 2014

Yes as you sow so you reap is the base as the cosmic principle upon which each person is awarded or punished...........very nicely composed

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Akhtar Jawad 29 September 2014

A deep thoughtful poem.

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Gajanan Mishra 29 September 2014

An eye of truth open always, good writing, thanks.

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