Counterfeit Destinies Poem by Benjamin Roque

Counterfeit Destinies

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The cremation was premature,
Bischoff admits when apart from the parade
that rounds the corner of another Sunday—
Cuts urban air into diamonds.
Pendulous cufflinks like nickels wink at his back,
made visible as if by electrocution.
The advance, an underwater sprint,
mocks even a banquet of opiates;
Its inevitable rush
toward absence bookends life—
A domestic slur on anonymity.

Madness in his voice, Bischoff stalks
arbitrary sidewalks, sex worn floors—
The city devours naked language
with unhinged jaw—
Spits a cloud of dust, once teeth
from a mouth painted by Schiele.
From wine soaked hyena laughter,
honesty withers until morning's occupants
emerge, hands knitted beneath a roofless skull—
A bivouac for rats, restless for the next dwelling,
one replica after another.

The faces of a doll rush past,
sealed in train window glass, lips stitched on
to negotiate each variant. They remember
the wrong Bischoff—He paces between minutes
that counterfeit destinies. Room shrinks,
demonstrates claustrophobic dusk,
whose iron-pressed city stages rallies
for a comatose patient. Nobody participates
within the white sheet of the patient's dream:

Upon which, a monument to Bischoff crumbles.

Counterfeit Destinies
Wednesday, March 14, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: absence,destiny,dream,madness,morning,train,urban
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Originally published in Calliope Steam (Bell Drive Press,2017)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 15 March 2018

Write comment. Great start, Benjamin. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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Dr Antony Theodore 14 March 2018

The faces of a doll rush past, sealed in train window glass, lips stitched on to negotiate each variant....... one has to read it many times to understand you my dear poet...... peculiar use of words meaning a lot and conveying undertones......... thank you dear poet. tony

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Benjamin Roque 15 March 2018

Thank you for your kindness, Tony. This is a multi-layered tour indeed. I look forward to reading your work.

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Benjamin Roque

Benjamin Roque

Burlington, Vermont
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