Light the candle, watch the flame
Feel the heat, sense the shame
Hide the cuts, cover despair
Dress up, then re-dye the hair
Be a chameleon, blend different shades
Invite friends over, stash all the blades
In bed at night alone and depressed
Remember how you could've changed all of this?
even if this poem is written nicely but i sensed the sadness in every word that has been said..grace
both internal and end rhymes were great....fine diction used...Thanks! ! ! 10+++
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I would like to translate this poem
Sadness and satire beautifully blended in this rhythmic poem. You have the talent and the capability, Margaret. Please keep writing. Best Wishes Naseer