ramesh rai

Gold Star - 15,664 Points (13.12.1955 / howrah)

Crescent Moon - Poem by ramesh rai

After twilight the moon is reborn
her sickle shaped face is captivating
like a lass under teen inviting her youth
stars surrounded her in throng
to view her new look and whispered
wanton eyes of stars making her nervous
to attire her shy she covers her face under azure sky.


Comments about Crescent Moon by ramesh rai

  • Gold Star - 30,060 Points Akhtar Jawad (5/27/2014 11:28:00 AM)

    Chand ki kalaon ka yeh sunder aur romanchak karan, kavi ki achuti kalpana, is kavita ka sondarya kewal poorab wale hi iska anand le sakte hayn, jahan lajja sondarya ko barhati hay aur prmi ko uksati hay. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 14,919 Points * Sunprincess * (4/8/2014 7:36:00 AM)

    .........this is truly a beautiful write....and these lines give me a smile...
    ~wanton eyes of stars making her nervous
    to attire her shy she covers her face unde azure sky. ~ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 122 Points Yash Shinde (4/8/2014 12:19:00 AM)

    this makes you picture the entire landscape full of stars.............with crescent moon lighting up the night skies! ...............lovely write (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,800 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (4/6/2014 10:34:00 PM)

    she covers her face under azure sky.
    Crescent moon is beautifully described in the poem. Thank you. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, April 6, 2014

Poem Edited: Tuesday, April 8, 2014


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