ramesh rai

Gold Star - 10,402 Points (13.12.1955 / howrah)

Crescent Moon


After twilight the moon is reborn
her sickle shaped face is captivating
like a lass under teen inviting her youth
stars surrounded her in throng
to view her new look and whispered
wanton eyes of stars making her nervous
to attire her shy she covers her face under azure sky.

Submitted: Sunday, April 06, 2014
Edited: Tuesday, April 08, 2014

Topic of this poem: Imagery


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  • Gold Star - 15,757 Points Akhtar Jawad (5/27/2014 11:28:00 AM)

    Chand ki kalaon ka yeh sunder aur romanchak karan, kavi ki achuti kalpana, is kavita ka sondarya kewal poorab wale hi iska anand le sakte hayn, jahan lajja sondarya ko barhati hay aur prmi ko uksati hay. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 6,572 Points * Sunprincess * (4/8/2014 7:36:00 AM)

    .........this is truly a beautiful write....and these lines give me a smile...
    ~wanton eyes of stars making her nervous
    to attire her shy she covers her face unde azure sky. ~ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 72 Points Yash Shinde (4/8/2014 12:19:00 AM)

    this makes you picture the entire landscape full of stars.............with crescent moon lighting up the night skies! ...............lovely write (Report) Reply

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