Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 214,236 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Cry Not - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

You should not cry else tears may fall
Hold them back until, you make call
you tell them not to fall or roll
is the cry only way left for recall?

Go in isolation or on the roof top
yell and shout as much as you and don’t stop
If need be then go to the hill peak
Shout in wilderness and don’t speak,

I want that not a word is heard,
No tears must be seen or feared
no one should come to sob you off
and no one should cut a joke on you and laugh

if you Cry in open or complain to anybody,
it may bring disgrace to somebody
it may prove difficult and the path may not be easy?
It will always trouble you even if you are so busy?

Never say in open that you loved her
Even if you want cry then don’t bother
don’t excuse that wall was so high
Wall may remain there even if you fly

Claim not that moral was so high,
you won’t get whatever you want in life
she may not become your wife,
then will you put your neck to knife?

See the reason and decide for and against
it is real submission that will be counted for as test,
what happens if you simply go for admission,
There may still be omission and emission,

Cry not for the beautiful and bright “eyes'
They are completely veiled to say byes
It may offer very good smile
When you are in very good mood for while

It is sign of cowardice and lack of the will
You should go for all the options available still
Why do you prefer to shed the tears in corner?
You should preserve your energy in the burner

There will be definite turn and change
Time may come and you will be able to manage
It will be good sign for honest and sincere lover
Rain too may feel happy and pour the shower

Think that you are the only person to be so lucky
The situation may prove difficult and tricky
Still you may have to face to the tune of rough weather
If you get her on your side then it will be honor or feather

Prove to the world that you are the only person?
There is every possibility to succeed for simple reason
The luck has to smile on you and wait for the chance
You will have then no time to look back and glance

Comments about Cry Not by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Alen Alexander (3/24/2010 6:51:00 AM)

    sad, but i guess though provoking to some, makes you think twice. strong words and expressions. good one! (Report) Reply

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  • Abby Keen/harris Abby Keen/harris (2/13/2010 7:50:00 PM)

    its a great poem i liked it alot! keep going :) (Report) Reply

  • Marcella D (1/16/2010 3:21:00 PM)

    that was so sad: (good poetry (Report) Reply

  • Demon lover (1/15/2010 7:14:00 PM)

    its beautifully sad but also very good (Report) Reply

  • Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (12/2/2009 9:38:00 AM)

    Cry not, tears may fall
    hold them back, until,
    You tell them to role
    is the cry the only way left? ...

    Great words my friend. Well done! (Report) Reply

  • Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (10/28/2009 3:55:00 PM)

    But I’ll cry and fry me for pains of others but not for me. Ok Sir.
    A poem gives us Abhi [fearlessness]
    Ms. Nivedita

    Cordially invite to read and comment on
    Enigmatic Navel or other poems
    niv (Report) Reply

  • Catrina Heart (9/20/2009 9:37:00 AM)

    Cry not my friend you have a heart golden
    Cry not my pal you have a soul clear as river
    Cry not my peer you have a mind so beautiful
    Like diamond, with a sapphire eye, ruby tower to lean on..............Lovely poem! ! ! 10. (Report) Reply

  • Whisperkwane Lamb (9/18/2009 1:37:00 PM)

    Like crying in the rain no one can see your pain...your tears and fears...but they are there...as you are there...shout not at thee but at me...love goes full circle...thats perfect...a perfect 360 circle...you have said the best of your words... (Report) Reply

  • Sunita Rao (9/17/2009 9:46:00 PM)

    Cry not, tears may fall,
    hold them back, until,
    You tell them to roll,
    is the cry only way left? (Report) Reply

  • Twinkle Vohra (9/17/2009 7:14:00 AM)

    Cry not, tears may fall,
    hold them back, until,
    You tell them to roll,
    is the cry only way left? (Report) Reply

  • Sagarika Shah (9/17/2009 6:58:00 AM)

    Go to the roof top,
    yel as much as u can,
    go to the hill top, (Report) Reply

  • Sachin Goswami (9/17/2009 6:50:00 AM)

    Cry not, tears may fall,
    hold them back, until,
    You tell them to roll,
    is the cry only way left? (Report) Reply

  • K.v. Subbarao (9/8/2009 10:47:00 PM)

    Cry in open or complain,
    May bring digrace to her, .........10 (Report) Reply

  • Venkat Ramanna (9/8/2009 10:37:00 PM)

    it is very good poem....10 (Report) Reply

  • Sadia Hussain (9/8/2009 8:13:00 AM)

    Go to the roof top,
    yel as much as u can,
    go to the hill top,
    Shout in wilderness, (Report) Reply

  • Ramdulari Sinha (9/3/2009 10:02:00 PM)

    Cry not, tears may fall,
    hold them back, until,
    You tell them to roll,
    is the cry only way left? ....10 (Report) Reply

  • Severina Dsouza (8/18/2009 10:36:00 AM)

    u should not cry in open...10 (Report) Reply

  • Ashley Paul (8/16/2009 9:40:00 AM)

    it will bringshameand discredit...10 (Report) Reply

  • Chetna Purohit (8/15/2009 10:02:00 PM)

    cry not else it will bring shame on u....10 (Report) Reply

  • Tear Of An Angel S.R.B.W. (8/15/2009 11:19:00 AM)

    There is a time for every emotion we have. Even crying. But never is good to allow yourself to be overtaken by pure emotion. One tends to lose themselves. Often people cry when they are angry. some cry when they are happy. tears are only an abundance of excess emotion needing to be released. So yell if you must in an open empty field. or sit in silence crying isolated from the world. emotions will still be. you can keep yourself busy to ignore your emotions. but as soon as you slow down...sooner or later you find an ocean of emotions are still there. learn to swim in the ocean or one will eventually drown. however, i prefer a boat. lol ~~Tear~~ (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, April 16, 2009

Poem Edited: Tuesday, March 23, 2010

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