Cutting Poem by Victoria Ayres

Cutting



I'll say it, I'll tell
The world will finally know
Yes I did those things
Made red out of white snow
The icy steel was smooth
Sank so easily in
Out was not so sweet
But still my powers win
I understand it's bad
I'm crazy now they say
For cutting myself all up
Each and every day

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brandon Owens 06 May 2010

It's a very good poem, the rhyme isn't forced. I like it. There is good imagery in there too. Well done.

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angel unknown 27 December 2008

been there and done tht. its really not worth it. but hey do wat u gotta do.

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