Daddy Poem by ciara long

Daddy



daddy you left me
in a world unknow. you
said you loved me but
you walked out the door

how you left me with
your so called wife
she beat me in the closet
and tured off the light
daddy dont leav me pleas
come back i miss and love
so daddy come back

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Martyres 17 June 2009

This is such a poignant piece Ciara...I do hope things will change for you

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Ch J Satyananda Kumar 17 June 2009

Pathetic. The present day's modern life often drives children to misery. The cruel treatment by step mother. Young men think of themselves only when they re-marry, but forget about their children. It is good fathers atleast admit their young children in Hostels or Boarding Homes, when they opt to remarry or they may leave their children with their ex-wives if they are willing.

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