Anna Hardin

Rookie (Feb.11,2000 / Cartersville, Georgia)

Daddy's Girl


You were ripped away just to soon,
Worst than a tycoon.
I felt like a hollow shell of my original self,
To comfort me, all I have is a lonely picture on a shelf.

Myself, I save,
is to visit your grave.
Not even the darkest days,
will stop me from coming your way.

You were took at fifty-two.
Too young, you never knew.
Too much for me to handle at twelve.
Forever in memory, your pictures are on my shelves.

June 19,2012
-For my mother Dawn Lochridge Hardin

Submitted: Tuesday, June 19, 2012
Edited: Monday, September 24, 2012

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This poem is dedicated to my mother from when she lost her father, my grandfather, before I was ever born, when she was 12.

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  • Gold Star - 10,508 Points * Sunprincess * (6/25/2014 8:05:00 PM)

    ..............oh this is a wonderful dedication...very nice poem..... (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,602 Points Darlene Walsh (6/25/2014 4:08:00 PM)

    This was a lovely poem. A fathers cherished love must be very special, I wish you had the chance to know your grandfather. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 37 Points Colleen Courtney (6/25/2014 2:26:00 AM)

    This is so sad and I can most definitely relate. I am the youngest of four girls and my Dad passed when he was only 49. I however was 21 so I was lucky to have a little more time with mine than your mom did with hers. Either way though it is far too young an age for a father to be taken from his family. Love your wonderful and emotional poem! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sun Shine (7/31/2013 11:57:00 PM)

    Forever in memory, your pictures are on my shelves.
    I can feel what it is to handle at young age. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 27,319 Points Gajanan Mishra (6/25/2013 4:58:00 AM)

    good poem, thanks.
    I invite you to read my poems and comment. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 94 Points Stephen Loomes (6/25/2013 4:47:00 AM)

    I like your poem and your loving empathy (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 175 Points Vizard Dhawan (6/25/2013 12:30:00 AM)

    what a poem from the little girl
    talent has no age
    you have proved it
    worthy poem of the day (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Faith Pfumbidza (7/28/2012 7:29:00 AM)

    deep emotional poem.it deserves to be the poem of the day (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Alexis ... (6/27/2012 11:14:00 AM)

    Beautiful Poem! ! ! That was really touching! I'm sorry for your loss. In a way I can sympathize with you..I have two poems That voice and those words, and Memory...which are similar. Please read them and let me know what you think in the comments (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 740 Points Kaila George (6/26/2012 12:19:00 AM)

    Reminds me of my parents...miss them...but to lose someone so young...its a brillant write....heart wrenching...no wonder its poem of the day. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,155 Points Jayatissa K. Liyanage (6/25/2012 10:54:00 PM)

    An excellent poem. It depicts a true love between father and daughter. Thoughts are as pure as milk. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 33 Points Mark Dillon (6/25/2012 1:04:00 PM)

    A beautiful poem, I feel your loss. But he's there always in your heart and watching over you, sweet dreams (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Besa Dede (6/25/2012 11:55:00 AM)

    This is a very heartfelt poem. It's good to remember your grandparents by honoring their memory, through poems or other narrative forms. This poem has a nice rhythm and I like it.
    Regards,
    ~Besa (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 250 Points Wala' Qamhieh (6/25/2012 9:38:00 AM)

    Ooh! ! ! Fantastic...! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 35 Points A Lifetime Of Fame (6/25/2012 9:18:00 AM)

    Man, that's deep. It is admirable how much you loved your father. No doubt, he loved you just as much. Thank you for sharing! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 123 Points marvin brato (6/25/2012 4:33:00 AM)

    Good tribute to a beloved daughter! (Report) Reply

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