Dance Of Life Three Step Poem by Harlan Simantel

Dance Of Life Three Step

Rating: 4.8


two steps forward
one step back
a typical life
life is on track

one step forward
two steps back
to be expected
another setback

listen to the music
less attention to the feet
life grows surer -
happier - sweet

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Seema Chowdhury 12 March 2008

hi Harlan, thanks for sending your lovely comments about my poem i really appreciate. i am happy to know you share the same feeling sand can relate to my poems, if you enjoyed you can read more poems of mine. i really liked your poem this is life and this is livinng. very good rhyme scheme. well done. i would like to tell you that i am in artist myself and have done pencil sketches, water painting and oil painting too. take care and keep in touch. seema

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Mary Gordley 06 March 2008

'One step forward, three steps back' is one of my husbands favorite expressions. Your poem is a great interpretation of that concept. Thanks

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Ashley Reeves 05 March 2008

great rythem

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Hillsboro, Oregon USA
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