Dancing With Shadows Poem by Practicing Poetess

Dancing With Shadows

Rating: 4.7


You're reaching for a ghost from the past,
Who is gone
Dancing with shadows,
While you're all alone.

There are a million women
Who'd join you in the dance
But you won't release the shadows,
Or give them half a chance.

Step out into the light, and open
Lovelorn eyes, to see
All the gals who'd love to love you,
...And one of them is me.

Thursday, November 1, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: alone,love lost,second chance love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Prabir Gayen 09 May 2019

Very beautiful poem dear poetess.... Step out into the light, and open Lovelorn eyes, to see All the gals who'd love to love you, ...And one of them is me.... thanks

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Thank you, Prabir, for your fine comment! : -)

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Tom Allport 02 November 2018

A poem from a broken heart wishing to made whole again? ........well penned PP

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Practicing Poetess 02 November 2018

Thank you, Tom! I so appreciate the 'well-penned'!

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Aqua Flower 02 November 2018

Superb! ! ! What great lines with meaningful message.....well crafted! ! ! 10

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Practicing Poetess 02 November 2018

Thank you, Aqua! Good to see you! This one sounds like the type of poem that you would enjoy!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 02 November 2018

Such a marvelous poem.................

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Practicing Poetess 02 November 2018

Thank you, Bernard, for appreciating & commenting!

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Louis Rams 01 November 2018

he's dancing with shadows but yet to see the beauty that lies within thee

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Practicing Poetess 01 November 2018

Awww, sweet! Thanks, Louis! :)

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