hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 68,169 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Dark Corner - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

Terrible dark corner
Makes it harsher
Reality comes to fore
I sweat more and more

How many things to remember?
For life to be made sweet for pleasure
It is never made in absence of true resolve
The question remain as puzzle to solve

There is no need
For the advice to be heeded
It was past misdeed
Now it is all dead

I need to be active
And not passively reactive
The future still lies ahead
The past must be buried

I shall find no words
To write and look forward
It has no place to be remembered
As solution was certainly offered

Now I am not far from reality
I can resolutely express quality
I am human being and shall remain so
Past has to be forgotten or allowed to go


Comments about Dark Corner by hasmukh amathalal

  • Gold Star - 68,169 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/6/2014 9:50:00 PM)

    very good


    Lilly Emery 17 minutes ago
    :)
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  • Gold Star - 68,169 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/6/2014 9:24:00 PM)

    Damn


    Kayla KileyLess than a minute ago
    I really like this one and I feel that it is relevantly relatable. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 68,169 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/6/2014 9:19:00 PM)

    Terrible dark corner
    Makes it harsher (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, February 6, 2014



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