'I am daughter of Isis, all that is, and all that shall be, I am daughter, princess, mother, I am all three, exalted, out spoken, short tempered, and wise, I am higher than all, though 'smaller' in size, I am your master and mistress, keeper of light, I am heavenly mother to worlds, I delight, I am truth and justice, 'righter' of wrongs, I play musical instrument's write beautiful songs, I am daughter of Isis, all that is 'real' speaker of 'truth' from the heavenly guild., with my courage, wisdom and pride, I rule all of Egypt, with my 'beloved' Antony at my side..'
Much better, a good poem is now an excellent poem 10/10 BB : O)))
A good poem with nice rhythm and rhyme but the end needs a little work as is shudders to a halt with no conclusion or if it is a conclusion doesn't feel right. Very good effort 9/10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Dear Thea has always been of great intrest of me. I feel she was highly misunderstood!