Dawn Chorus Poem by Sagi Writes

Dawn Chorus

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How can I forget
the songs of warblers
and wrens singing softly at dawn?

the hoarseness of hawks in the golden fields,
soaring high and disappearing
like the freezing cold of yesterday?

how they turn my emptiness
into a morning full of summer blooms.


Their dawn chorus
slowly flows like a stream
in my sleepless thoughts,

gently going straight to my heart
and bringing me rest.

And creates a sound,
a rippling echo of today's dream,

along with the rustles of evergreens
raising their branches for a toast
to the approaching hues of daybreak

having their mellifluous entrance
on the eastern horizon,
a glimpse of hope cloaking me with light.

With their wingbeats, my spirit flies.



©️Sagi Writes

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Terence Craddock 14 April 2023

Your poem 'Dawn Chorus' is so beautiful with so many wonderful beautiful lines, I would love to quote so many in appreciation here but there is no space, birds at dawn chorus are amazing, 'With their wingbeats, my spirit flies.'

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I wrote the poems 'Delight In Break Of Dawn Silk Spun Threads Unread' and 'Eternity Echoes In Break Of Early Morn Dawn', inspired by the poem 'Dawn Chorus', by the poet Sagi Writes and dedicated to Sagi Writes.

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Terence George Craddock 13 February 2024

This is an enchantingly beautifully crafted poem, it saddens me that a year has passed, and not a single new poet has come, to delight in these lines.

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Terence Craddock 14 April 2023

This is an absolutely adorable poem and I enjoyed it immensely. I reread this poem several times in deep appreciation. My first comment is a poem I will gift to you soon.

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Terence George Craddock 13 February 2024

I wrote the short poems 'Rapture Wilderness Instant Awakening' and 'Dawn Chorus Orchestra Crescendo', , inspired by the poem 'Dawn Chorus', by the poet Sagi Writes and dedicated to Sagi Writes.

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Terence George Craddock 13 February 2024

I wrote the brevity poems 'Dawn Daybreak Calls', 'Dawn Intensity Birdsong', 'Breaking Dawn', 'Birth Dawn Creeping' and 'Birth New Dawn', inspired by the poem 'Dawn Chorus', by the poet Sagi Writes and dedicated to Sagi Writes.

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Terence Craddock 20 January 2024

The poem 'An Intensity Of Birdsong: Wilderness Dawn Chorus', is the original poem I wrote, inspired by the poem 'Dawn Chorus', by the poet Sagi Write and dedicated to the poet Sagi Writes. Time passes.

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Terence Craddock 14 April 2023

I wrote the poem 'Birdsongs Welcoming Blessing New Dawn', inspired by the poem 'Dawn Chorus', by the poet Sagi Writes and dedicated to Sagi Writes.

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