Daybreak Poem by C Note

Daybreak

Rating: 2.8


I reach out for you in what has become the dawn -
The tireless night has surrendered
To the reality of civil twilight.
My heart today, I’ll leave behind
Next to your picture
To bask in the half-light of the morning air
Still heavy with the burden of you.
Your scent has since long left our pillows
Yet I still bury my face within
What my imagination will allow.
I’ll open my eyes to a world without you
And won’t glance at your side of the bed
Undisturbed.
I’ll pretend to be an adult
Masking the tear streaked cheeks of a child
With a grown man’s sensibility.
I place both feet on the floor of this Tuesday morning
Looking towards the breaking day.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brenda Arroyo 22 April 2010

I am in awe of how you expressed such a somber situatioin, so beautifuly... 'Your scent has since long left our pillows Yet I still bury my face within What my imagination will allow.' Through your words, I felt this. I felt the loss and the emptiness.

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Iron Panda 23™ 21 April 2010

i likes how this was expressed.....a reaally good write i think (:

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Bethany Williams 14 April 2010

o so sad. sorry for your broken heart. Everyone goes through bad break ups. Great poem though

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Crazy Vampire 13 April 2010

im sorry...about ur heartbreak...we all must go through it...good poem

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Goldy Locks 13 April 2010

Melancholy compressed: the daily struggle to rise after a difficult breakup...I know the feeling. Well expressed. Goldy

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