Dead Soon Poem by Ashley Carnes

Dead Soon

Rating: 5.0


O Jesus Lord
help me out
as the toughts of death
just creep me out.

Everyday is a constant thought,
of slitting wrists and hanging heads,
Darkness is falling upon the world;
so just kick me out.

The days go by sad and slow
so now il just go with the flow.
Days are boring
Nights are worst.


Just let me out into the night
and out of sight.
O jesus lord;
Stop letting me fight.

This is the end
so dont try and stop
just put a gun
to my head.
And BOOM!
il be dead.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Paolo Giuseppe Mazzarello 15 October 2008

Once upon a time there was a Francois Villon, an old French poet Ms. Carnes should absolutely read. Ashley is better than him but one mustn't tell her it.

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Emo Seb 06 March 2008

i love this...crazy, i have the same prayers some time...keep prayin, kuz yer day will come!

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