Shania K. Younce

Rookie - 309 Points (4-18-1996 / I can´t remember.)

'Death'


Death so sweet and kind. In its splendor shines the bright light. While quietly creeping upon you is death. Your embracing the cold. While warming your blood to ice. Turning white, bright, and pale. Your lips rose red. Your eyes full of life. Your hair full of beauty. Its the end of your life.

Submitted: Wednesday, May 08, 2013
Edited: Tuesday, September 17, 2013

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I thought of this poem in my first period class. Please comment at will and with honesty.

Comments about this poem ('Death' by Shania K. Younce )

  • Rookie - 264 Points Words' Knight (3/17/2014 4:13:00 PM)

    Bright poem.It denotes that you are dexterious you are.Tres tres bien. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Onalethuso Petruss Buyile Ntema (5/10/2013 6:18:00 AM)

    death...i like the imagery and the poetic skills displayed in this one short but informative and gothic piece. it reminds me of how death is perceived an enemy to life though none would escape the death trap; we all will, die. check out mine piece if and when i die..thanks.

    ntema

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  • Gold Star - 27,070 Points Gajanan Mishra (5/8/2013 10:24:00 AM)

    death so sweet, I like it. thanks.
    I invite you to read my poems and comment. (Report) Reply

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