Down in the water
by the edge of the river
where time stands still,
.....if only forever.
Down in the water
by the edge of the river
where I buried all
that was ever childhood
Where I let it go,
where it bends and meanders,
twisting along as the years went past.
Seemingly calm, but beneath the surface
its hidden whirlpools, a sweeping current!
Down in the water,
I left the edge of the river,
as I looked down
for my soul at the bottom.
Deep in the water!
swept away by the river! ,
I drowned in life,
......sinking forever.
Hey ya, A perfect 10 for you from me! ! I like the way your words flow in this poem of yours. Embedded meanings, nicely sentenced! ! Nice, really nice! ! With lots of best wishes and love, K.Poornima
I kept waiting for the Chris Farley punchline of 'In A Trailer'. All kidding aside...a very 'deep' poem....
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Wow... i really like the ending of this poem, too!