Demon Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Demon

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God created a demon
That was called human
Every time he or she is caught
She is trying to prove it right

There is no limit to treachery
It is considered fine blend of oratory
People exclaim” what a brilliant man is he “?
Totally aloof and worry free

His conscious knows what he is all about
How much are deep his roots!
What does he do to survive race?
Why does he claim innocence on face?

When almighty gives shock?
He becomes powerless to stake
All kind of mercy appeal
Now he faces problem real

He comes to know about love
He laments about past hate and believes
The life is not what is talked about
The real life is what is experienced in and out

Let people do what they like
Do not leave the path and strike
At innocent or poor
Else god shall too show you the door

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 April 2014

God created a demon That was called human

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Gajanan Mishra 30 April 2014

let people do whatever they like, but it should be in love and in truth. good sir.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 April 2014

About demons (I don't know I'm only 10.) Madison King13 minutes ago I didn't understand

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 April 2014

RAMESH AGRAWAL12 minutes ago ????? ??? ?? ?? ???? ?? Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 April 2014

Post A very good poem. Amir Samji8 minutes ago I read it, and I like it. What I have to say, its depend on foundation of the kids. If they are brought up ethically with all truth in it, he/she will be a good citizen of that country. I would like to add something to it when you say; 'Let people do what the like but with the sense of responsibility' Otherwise, I feel it would be 'misuse of freedom'. Comment +1

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1 day ago « Delete » tshultrim Mok.. God created a demon That was called human - Very interesting!

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Scott Ransopher Another good poem Hasmukh! 2 hrs · Unlike · 1

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